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Number 288
August/September 2001

Ravishment
CHRIS TYSH
Copyright © 2001 Poetry Flash

THE PARADISE OF FORMS: Selected Poems, by Aaron Shurin, Talisman House Publishers, Jersey City, New Jersey, 1999, 142 pages, $14.95 paper. Available from Small Press Distribution.

Like a handsome stranger you bump into at a cocktail party without exchanging a word, Shurin's writing has hailed me with its mysterious grace for years, always leaving behind that unmistakable longing. Dang! you say, this stuff is good. Perhaps, a tux, in any case, evening clothes, suave, chic, intimate and yet something's awry, ever so slightly, a small detail gives it away, an intimation of private tenebrum, some penalties levied for so much beauty,

A hooded countenance that offers the jetty of romance.
(from A Possible Life, page 36)

Or maybe I'm dreaming of the perfect crème brûlée: burned on top, crispy sugar I take tiny bites of, breaking through to the smooth creamy perfection below.

Aaron Shurin's book The Paradise of Forms is about ravishment and the interminable sweet wrenching music box of the heart. Not that the poems which span two rich decades grind out their stuff like a hapless traveling hurdy-gurdy man but rather because the lyricism they evince is the admission of man's pleasure and its inevitable loss.

As the jouissance they proffer can only live in words, the poet finds himself held in the compulsive logic of both marking and surviving that loss. Like Isis recomposing the beloved's body, Shurin must rebind what has been spilled on the sheet; revive the stoppered pulse, each time he faces the black and white measures of his art. Such is the imperial movement of voluptas.

swallowed on purpose to make the taker have bliss, all the world are nothing like lips, hairs, cheeks. in the breath hear speak faith, make love groan in swear my judgment in deeds. full star ushers in those eyes; become then heart for me in every part. me from myself taken and my next self of him, keeps my heart his guard and that is me. Under that bind beauty all to use, more than enough shall in others shine, receives in abundance me that I come so near. And, admitted there, fulfill untold hold. know best to be anchored in common place, this world is simple truth in seeming trust. age have years to justify tongue; use power: tell love outright (from Artery, page 55)

Although Paradise includes a generous selection from at least six different manuscripts, one poetic form seems to impose itself as being particularly suited to the author's concern. Developed by a number of Language-associated poets----and at times it looked as if taking their cues from painters who did everything but paint, poets had forsaken the 'poem'---the prose stanza is here a key player.

Supple yet muscular, lyric yet analytic, irregular yet rhythmic, capable of both movement and stasis, this unit of composition justifies Shurin's predilection for it. Shurin's stanzas have the impudent charm of a pin-up and the falsely unstructured elegance of style. As the Beau Brumells of the world will tell you, if you can define it, you don't have it.

appearances, after all, may be only speculations; identities are of the real. hold me by the hand, that is subtle air, impalpable, curiously words hold untellable, reason confound us, sense surround us, he travels to me and these are the shining things I perceive. I walk in the fable of a man, charged with points of view, skies of colors, densities, and something yet to be known…
(from City of Men, page 60)

What we do see with a surveyor's sense of clarity is a landscape etched, "Cut, tattooed, & hot-belted / across the middle," ("Raving #25, Vernal Equinox"), whose language draws up vast enigmas, tracts and ravines, calling the desiring machines by name, singing their amorous disorder as if one could fathom the depths, "the difference between you and me," ("The Wheel," part III), as if one could countersign such ruination, burn out such a wound. Among the temptations and the continuous thunder of bodies, Shurin carves out a poetics of male subjectivity that is infinitely complex, prodigal and sublime for the way it deals with the gay imaginary, and for its radical song that has both the intimacy of a love letter and the daily plainness of public address.

I lie in your arms. I kiss your mouth. Use your nails, creature. Our roles---the crown, the infractions---inhabit this sanctified place to the point of fanaticism. I have to get my hands on the world.
(from "Human Immune")

And it is precisely this urgency "to keep the body forward," as Shurin wrote in 1988 in the Postscript to City of Men, and to touch "the split field of / darkness & light" ("Raving #25, Vernal Equinox") that gives Paradise its material bedding like a river we come to after the siege.

Each reader will enter these pages with a different retinue wanting to kill the messenger or take the hill depending on his/her plat du jour but no one will be blind to the unnerving beauty of stepping into this fabled realm, like a rare hybrid, half Fellini, half Genet.

The road, night, rubble: are you sleepwalking?
(from "Sphere")

In this lyric heaven, the poems drape themselves over the risers like somnolent divas in various stages of undress, the words' shapes and sounds so extravagant in their polymorphous truths, one is tempted to hush all the rest: "a child is building a dream house" ("Reaching Particle").

In a culture deadened by surfeit and a permanent déjà-vu aesthetics, Aaron Shurin has cut a path which not only links him to the likes of Robert Duncan, John Wieners, and Jack Spicer (though I also detect the sexier than sex aura of l'incomparable Monique Wittig, sa soeur) but lets him claim a prominent place in contemporary American letters. His is a language steeped in the revolutionary inventiveness of the seventies and eighties, and the liberatory practices of his generation. The Paradise of Forms becomes the indispensable record of these tumultuous decades where the search for poetic forms has been parallel to the critique of norms, bourgeois values and canonical texts. The paradise in question posits a Rimbaldian elsewhere, away from the repressive conformism so that a new language might engender a novel, yet to be dreamt of, world.

I return to the passage, for example, without time and the weather being fixed, to see for a second the opaque body that gave the plain little phrase its secret longing. (from "The Ingredients")

 

Chris Tysh teaches Creative Writing and Women's Studies at Wayne State University in Detroit and serves as Poetry Editor for UnderWire, an electronic journal (www.underwire.net). Her newest book is Continuity Girl from United Artists.

 

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