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Number 294 & 295
Summer/Fall 2005

The River Will Sing
JAMES LeCUYER
Copyright © 2005 Poetry Flash

RIVER OF WORDS: Images and Poetry in Praise of Water, edited by Pamela Michael, introductory essays by Robert Hass and Thacher Hurd, Heyday Books, Berkeley, 2003, 78 pages, $12.95 paper.

RIVER OF WORDS, P.O. Box 4000-J, Berkeley, CA, 94704, 510/548-7636. Fax: 510/548-2095. E-mail: info@riverofwords.org. Web site: www.riverofwords.org.

YOUNG AT ART GALLERY, Children’s art and poetry from around the world, 2547 8th Street, Studio 13-B, near the corner of 8th and Dwight, Berkeley, California, 510/548-7636. Hours: Monday–Thursday, 9:00 a.m.–5:00, Friday 2:00–5:00.

River of Words: Images and Poetry in Praise of Water presents six years of the best of the best children’s environmental poetry and art as submitted to the International River of Words Contest. While the book is beautiful and appeals to adults, it is one of the few national publications for children’s creative work, fine poetry with full-color art done by people ranging in age from five to nineteen. The book is only part of a much larger River of Words Program promoting literacy, watershed awareness and the arts among youth throughout the world. Images and Poetry in Praise of Water is available at the ROW office, Young at Art Gallery in Berkeley.
Writer/organizer Pamela Michael is the Editor, as well as Director of River of Words. She was formerly Director of the United Nations Task Force on Media and Education. She and Robert Hass, U.S. Poet Laureate from 1995-97, and award winning illustrator Thacher Hurd collaborated to make the selections in the book and to write introductory essays on art and the environment. Images and Poetry in Praise of Water would be lovely on any table or shelf, but is particularly good for educators who could draw classroom examples from it, or use them as a class set. The work represents youth speaking to us through their common creativity across generations and cultures. Classroom Art and English teachers would instantly recognize how useful such a collection could be.
Since Poetry Flash is not yet published in color, it’s difficult to show the art in all its glory here, but the poetry speaks for the qualitiy of the book:

Water Shed Poem

Tread of pale stream,
Hemming watery licks.
And pebbles promise
Tootsie nooks
Burrowed scarce
Amongst the wind
And willow creep.
Finger tips,
Strain of sky
Winged on ripping sun stripe.
Flight made on robin
Torn in a scarlet
Slaughtered breast
And moon bond leaves
Gilded in palms of dream brooks.
—Lucy Barber, age 11

This little list poem uses unusual syntax to hint at simple childhood pleasures, the lick of water and nooks for toes, pleasures that may be vividly recalled but often undervalued in our busy adult lives. Then the poem turns, bringing in a ripped, deathly tone, the scarlet breast of a slaughtered robin, and turning again to a higher plane of “moon bond leaves” and “dream brooks,” “gilded,” as if one were looking back from Heaven on what was, while the environment was alive, heavenly. Incomplete sentences and enjambment add to the cataloguing effect and help create a longing voice from what is there now, but could die. Better hold on to these pleasures, this poem suggests, before they are torn apart into dreams. Of course, the poet is eleven and living her joyful experiences, but aware they can be lost. It is our children’s fears of the potential destruction of our environment that brought Bob Hass and Pam Michael to their work for River of Words. The poem’s tone begins to turn at “scarce” and “creep,” but “pale,” with its suggestion of weakness and illness, is right there in the first line to undercut childhood joy.
More than contests or books, River of Words is an extensive program intended to make school curricula earth friendly. It encouraging a youthful flow of energy that no corporate executive or politician or administrator would wish to dam. Even conservative Republican Newt Gingrich supported ROW because he saw it as helping American children love the land and, in his view, become more patriotic.
ROW is in every state; sometimes, as in Georgia, as part of the statewide curriculum coordinated with state environmental standards. Seventeen states currently award state ROW prizes. ROW has been reviewed by such national organizations as the North American Association of Environmental Educators. Members of the California Department of Fish and Game, the Coastal Commission, The California Regional Environmental Education Commission, the Department of Education, the Department of Forestry and the State Water Resources Control Board have helped carry the message of ROW. If a Girl Scout enters a poem or painting in the ROW Contest and fulfills a few requirements, she can get a Watershed Patch from the Girl Scouts (www.epa.gov/adopt/patch).
Thousands of young people and educators now participate in ROW. There could be millions if ROW were better funded, for there’s great desire on the part of teachers and youth to do something about the environment. (How about the Cissy Swig, Bill Gates, Henry Corning, or George Soros Watershed Prize?) An Afghani boy in a Pakistani refugee camp saw a ROW entry form on the back of a three-year-old copy of a Ranger Rick magazine and got on line and asked, in fractured English, if the contest was still on. He and seven others from the camp sent in heartbreaking art and poetry.
But children need not win to benefit. The environmental research and preparation done by teachers and students changes them even if they don’t see their work in print, or win a trip to Washington. They see that others around the world have similar questions and thoughts. In a most basic way, by discussing some of the problems of their own watershed, they act locally as they think globally. They begin to learn things about the natural world that most adults have never considered, such as what is the local watershed?
Art, some have said, comes partly from the artist’s desire to relieve anxiety. The more anguish or oppression an artist feels, the more intense the artistic effort can be. Destructive changes that children experience in their world can be very threatening, especially when a child first encounters wild nature and contrasts it to what humans have erected or dammed or paved over. Once children feel the archetypal power of a free river or untamed forest they aren’t likely to spray trees with Agent Orange or drop phosphates into pure waters. “The River is within us, the sea is all about us,” writes T.S. Eliot in Four Quartets. The River of Words Contest and Program encourages learning and action. Environmental ideals are already within the hearts of our children. We, who are about sixty percent water, have a sea of troubles to take arms against, if I am allowed to mix Eliot and Shakespeare.
River of Words has addressed in a simple but ingenious fashion the most basic problem facing humanity: How can we, creatures of air, earth and water, and perhaps the most conscious in the universe, avoid destroying ourselves and all the living beings that depend on our good will? Because ROW is a contest, it is welcomed into schools by administrators who might otherwise resist such difficult environmental questions. Education from the earliest age is one key answer.
“In wildness is the salvation of the world,” Henry David Thoreau, David Brower, Gary Snyder and others have often said. As many of us know, the wild is our own breath of life.
It’s a disaster that many young people growing up in front of computers or TV have little sense of the awesome reality of Nature except through Discovery Channels. Many children from areas such as Hunter’s Point or Harlem may have never seen the ocean, though they might live two miles away.
Hass writes in his introduction, “If you put the Earth’s water—so I’ve heard—into a gallon jug, just over a tablespoonful would be available for human use. Ninety-seven percent of the planet’s water is in the ocean, and two percent is locked in icecaps and glaciers…what’s left lies in aquifers, often at inaccessible depths.”
Even this water is not evenly divided. Lack of fresh water is increasingly a cause of world conflict, a major reason, for example, for the Israeli/Palestinian conflict, and is, therefore, one precursor of the U.S. invasion of the Middle East. Global warming, partly resulting from oil consumption, geometrically increases the uneven distribution of the world’s fresh water as drier, hotter areas are formed near the equator; these areas are more susceptible to drought. Hotter air sucks up more moisture and carries it farther toward the two poles, where the warmer, moisture laden clouds cool and condense into powerful rain storms. Increased rainfall near the poles melts reflective snow, leaving dark earth exposed longer. As the dark patches absorb increasing amounts of heat, the poles warm up even more, thereby increasing the rate of snow and ice melt. While the world will increase in overall average temperature some five to eight degrees Fahrenheit over the next hundred years, releasing enormous amounts of formerly frozen carbon dioxide and methane, the Arctic region may increase as much as eighteen degrees. According to most scientists, there could be a corresponding rise in sea level of some eight to twenty inches as polar caps melt and the oceans warm and expand. This could be enough to drown Venice and obliterate many coastal communities worldwide, including much of Florida. The web of life is precariously woven together on this ball of mud by air and water. (For more information on global warming, see The New Yorker’s three-part article by Elizabeth Kolbert, April 25, May 2 and 9.)
If one starts with a poem about the watershed, one may begin to understand the whole cycle.

Down and up they go,
The waters that always flow,
The rivers that open their veins to the sea
And then return as snow.
Down from arterial hills
The circulation swills,
And down in the valley
The river will sing
As it refreshes everything…
—James Broughton
(from “The Water Circle,” Songs from a Long Undressing)

Nearly fifty years after Rachel Carson’s Silent Spring, despite the most noble intentions of millions of people, there are few school programs encouraging environmental action. Children need the facts. ROW joyfully encourages them to begin learning the important issues through this simple contest.

Thirst

Thirst, how I thirst to be loved
To be held
To be full like a river after the snow melts,
Or a puddle after the rain.
Thirst.
My grandmother says blessed are those that thirst
After righteousness for they will be filled.
Oh how I want to be full.
Thirst.
—Clarence Adams, age 17, Anacostia Watershed Prize
Poetry and Art from the River of Words Contest, 2004
River of Words/Young at Art Gallery, Berkeley, California

The analogy between rain, river and thirst on one hand and love—especially a grandmother’s love—on the other, is quite powerful. This thirst is of someone lonely for love, ready to drink down all the snow that melts and flows as love into a river or puddle after a rain. The opening is simple and personal. In the seventh line it shifts to a Biblical tone: “…blessed are those that thirst after righteousness.” This could be interpreted as judgmental, almost eerie, except that love and thirst have been equated, and the poet wants to be full of love, and if righteousness is the way to go about getting love, that’s the way he’ll go. And when he writes, “My grandmother,” one can think of the special love children often have for grandmothers, or of the Grandmother of Native Americans, the personal or the mythological grandmother. “Thirst” is repeated like a heartbeat or a drumbeat. Or a drip of water, not enough to satisfy, just one drop at a time. The poet’s thirsty now, and he’d like to be full, but will he take his grandmother’s spiritual path, or will he find a more human, personal love? We can’t keep our grandmothers forever, but maybe we can keep their love alive by following their words. Or is that not enough?
Pam Michael says, “A group of poets, educators, artists, river activists and booksellers began meeting weekly above a pizza parlor in Berkeley.” Among those initially there were Flash Editor Joyce Jenkins, her new husband, environmentalists Mark Baldridge and Nick Morgan, event producer Annice Jacoby, most of the staff of International Rivers Network, and Pamela Michael. Creative ideas began to flow. “Our goal,” said Michael, “was to blend poetry, art, nature study, watershed awareness, community service, history, and critical thinking into a flexible, simple and elegant curriculum for school children…We’d hoped to cause a few ripples in the education world; in fact, we caused a deluge.”
The deluge, nine years later, is a rising flood. River of Words flows through the U.S. and some forty nations, through a refugee camp in Quetta, Pakistan, to Kenya and Azerbaijan, China, Bulgaria, Malaysia and Afghanistan. But with funding so tight now, ROW could well dry up this year or next. Two people keep it going, Hass and Michael. Too often so much depends on so few. Or one could say, “A little goes a long way.”
Another book offered for sale at River of Words’ Young at Art Gallery in Berkeley is The Gift of Rivers:True Stories of Life on the Water (Travelers’ Tales Guides, 200 pages, $14.95 paper), edited by Michael, with an introduction by Hass. It includes a number of wonderful river adventures by authors such as Barry Lopez, Wendell Berry, Isabel Allende, and Kim Stafford. The stories are environmental and documentary.
One of the best pieces is Michael’s childhood memory of being rowed by her parents through a river of efflorescent bubbles. Most of her early life she thought this was a dream, but was later told that some vandals had dumped a truckload of laundry detergent into the waters upstream, creating a beautiful but dangerous cloud of suds.
Hass’s introduction briefly covers the probable history of the relationship of humans to water and presents some brilliant insights into his own travels on the Danube, the Whangpoo, and the Nile.
The River of Words Contest is free. Every child is acknowledged with a personalized “Watershed Explorer” certificate. Children may enter on their own or through schools, nature centers, libraries, youth clubs and other organizations.
The ROW Web site, which gives all the submission information, also offers tools and incentives to help teachers and students begin to explore their natural and cultural history. For example, what is the natural history of the block you grew up on, the streams that once ran through it?
The annual deadlines are: North American entries, postmark by February 15; International entries, postmark by March 1. Entries can be sent at any time throughout the year. Each year there are eight U.S. winners, one International winner, and a ROW Teacher of the Year honored during National Poetry Month at The Library of Congress River of Words Ceremony in Washington D.C. Finalists are published in the annual River of Words poetry and art anthology published in affiliation with The Library of Congress.
On June 5, 2005, the annual River of Words ceremony featured student award-winners at San Francisco’s City Hall, as part of the United Nations World Environmental Day festivities. Robert Hass emceed and introduced readings by student poets from all over the world. The ROW children’s art exhibit was also on display on the Main Floor of City Hall. Award-winning students will also read at this fall’s Watershed Environmental Poetry Festival on the UC Berkeley campus, September 24. The children’s compelling poetry readings and paintings, always a highlight of Watershed, are also exhibited at libraries, conferences, and other venues around the world.

Poet/environmentalist/educator Jim LeCuyer is the author of A Brick for Offissa Pup. He was a high school English and Creative Writing teacher at School for the Arts in San Francisco for many years.

 

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