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Number 287
April/May 2001

Carolyn Kizer & The Chain of Women
ANNIE FINCH
Copyright © 2001 Poetry Flash

This essay will appear in Carolyn Kizer: Perspectives on Her Life & Work, edited by Annie Finch, Johanna Keller, and Candace McClelland, to be published by CarvanKerry Press in June 2001. This important new collection explores and appreciates the contributions of one of our most influential poets in her seventy-fifth year. Carolyn Kizer won the Pulitzer Prize for Yin in 1985. Her books include her recently reissued debut The Ungrateful Garden, Midnight Was My Cry, Mermaids in the Basement, and Harping On: Poems 1985---1995. Her translations are collected in Carrying Over; two essays collections appeared in the nineties, Proses, On Poems and Poets, and Picking and Choosing, Essays on Prose. As an editor, she's published The Essential John Clare and the instant classic 100 Great Poems by Women. She began her career, with fellow student James Wright, studying with Theodore Roethke at University of Washington. (Pulitzer Prize poets all, and Carolyn Kizer was awarded the Theodore Roethke Prize in 1988.) She has spoken out with intellectural rigor and passion on many topics during her career. She founded Poetry Northwest in 1959, and served at the first Literature Program Director at the National Endowment for the Arts. She has traveled the world for poetry: in the sixties she was Specialtist in Literature for the U.S. State Department in Paskistan, in the seventies and eigthties she held apppoitments as distingusihed poet/lecturer at major universitites across the nations, influencing countless young poets. She is important to an entire generation of poets and teachers. A contribuitor to the volume, Carol Muske once wrote, "It's true. Carolyn Kizer hung the moon.…"Included in Carolyn Kizer: Perspectives on Her Life and Work are essays about her feminist politics, the influence of Chinese poetry in her work, and her teaching philosophy and methods, as well as poems dedicated to and inspired by her, and interviews that range over thirty years. Contributors include Hayden Carruth, Lucille Clifton, Robert Creeley, Judith Johnson, Jack Foley, Alfred Corn, Kim Vaeth, Maxine Kumin, Carol Muske Dukes, Marie Ponsot, Agha Shahid Ali, and many others. Cool, Calm & Collected, Poems 1960--2000, by Carolyn Kizer, has just been published by Copper Canyon. And a Tribute to this wonderful woman, this poet of boundless energy, of wit and fire, will be held at the Associated Writing Programs annual meeting in Palm Springs, California, April 2001.

It is the mark of a certain point in a young writer's development---arguably the onset of true literary maturity---when she looks up from the eclectic, sprawling collection of classic and contemporary influences she has been ostensibly pulling together for herself for many years, takes a long breath, and is struck by the depth of her indebtedness to a much smaller group of writers. Such a revelation happened to me recently regarding Carolyn Kizer. Since Kizer is approaching her seventy-fifth birthday and ready for some long-deserved appreciation, this essay pays tribute to her unique role in American women's poetry. After all, where would I, as a woman poet who feels a close connection to her foremothers in the art, be---and where would so many of us be---without the passionate figure of Carolyn Kizer to link us with our past as women poets?

Kizer might not place herself among the writers she so unforgettably dubbed, in "Pro Femina," "the toasts-and-teasdales we loved at thirteen." But she has earned a unique place in my personal canon just because of her sometimes ambivalent but always powerful relationship with such writers. Her poems meet me in the twenty-first century while simultaneously linking me back through a long tradition of emotionally astute, poetically exacting, passionate women poets that includes Phillis Wheatley, Frances Osgood, Emily Dickinson, Alice Dunbar Nelson, Sara Teasdale, Edna St. Vincent Millay, Anna Hampstead Branch, Louise Bogan, and Leonie Adams. Though the exquisitely crafted and classically controlled work of such poets is now beginning to earn a well-deserved reconsideration, it is still a legacy fraught with ambivalence for Kizer, as for most women poets. Responsibility to these poets' concerns has remained a crucial element of Kizer's aesthetic at the same time that awareness of their limitations has spurred her to refute and surpass them.

This powerful tradition of women poets built successful careers writing formal, accessible poems about spiritual and political as well as domestic and emotional themes. I call their techniques 'sentimentist' to distinguish them from the more familiar, very different techniques of the romantic poets. Independently of romanticism and modernism, the sentimentists developed and explored their own poetic traditions and techniques: they wrote of a shared, accessible world from an often diffused, uncentered point of view, and they tended to metaphorize the self, instead of nature or a loved one, in their lyrics. As the decades went on and women's positions improved, early twentieth-century sentimentists adapted many of their precedessors' techniques to more powerful and independent attitudes and themes.

But at mid-century the chain broke. The poems of Bishop and Moore preserved some aspects of the sentimentist tradition into the seventies, in a form so altered by the complex ironic stances of modernism that in their hands the tradition lost much of its original character. Plath and Sexton, both of whom guiltily admired the sentimentist women poets in their youth, died too young ever to admit it. Feminist poets who came of age in the sixties and seventies distanced themselves from the sentimentists because of their subject matter, not to mention their form. Finally, in the postmodern climate of the eighties and nineties, the hermetic tradition of Stein and H.D. pushed the sentimentists even further distant on the basis of their accessibility, while the intimate connections between Dickinson and the central thread of women's poetry continued to be ignored.

In the five decades following New Criticism the classic tradition of women's poetry had been torn apart. As Sandra M. Gilbert and Susan Gubar explain in their essay "Forward Into the Past," the price of poetic success for any woman after mid-centry has been to despise virtually all pre-twentieth century poetry by women, ignoring the intriguing affinities between Dickinson, not to mention H.D. and Stein, and the sentimentists. Yet, in such a climate of uncompromising obliviousness to the serious accomplishments of the vast bulk of women poets, Carolyn Kizer has consistently acknowledged and drawn on the legacy of the women poets who came before her. Kizer's allusions to her foremothers evoke, as often as not, anger, embarrassment, and pain. Nonetheless, she has kept this irreplaceable inheritance alive, and when the full story of women's poetry has been reclaimed, Kizer's importance as a poet should begin to be even more widely understood.

The complexity of Kizer's relationship to the sentimentists often forces her to play two different roles in some of her poems, as in her description of the "toasts-and-teasdales" in "Pro Femina":

I will speak about women of letters, for I'm in the racket.
Our biggest successes to date? Old maids to a woman.
And our saddest conspicuous failures? The married spinsters
On loan to the husbands they treated like surrogate fathers.
Think of that crew of self-pitiers, not-very-distant,
Who carried the torch for themselves and got first-degree burns.
Or the sad sonneteers, toast-and-teasdales we loved at thirteen;
Middle-aged virgins seducing the puerile anthologists
Through lust-of-the-mind; barbituate-drenched Camilles
With continuous periods, murmuring softly on sofas
When poetry wasn't a craft but a sickly effluvium,
The air thick with incense, musk, and emotional blackmail.

Kizer's description here leads to an attack on sentimentists like Teasdale and Millay, both childless, married to older businessman husbands, and eventually suicidal. Yet the number of lines that Kizer devotes to these "conspicuous failures" shows how impossible it is for her to ignore them completely, and her tirade incorporates a note of compassion for the sentimentists who, in attempting to combine heterosexual love with artistic creativity, succeeded only in earning our contempt:

Impugning our sex to stay in good with the men,
Commencing their insecure bluster. How they must have swaggered
When women themselves endorsed their own inferiority!
Vestals, vassals, and vessels, rolled into several,
They took notes in rolling syllabics, in careful journals,
Aiming to please a posterity that despises them.

Section Three of "Pro Femina" ends with a forthright assertion of Kizer's distance from the sentimentists:

But we're emerging from all that, more or less,
Except for some ladylike laggards and Quarterly priestesses
Who flog men for fun, and kick women to maim competition.
Now, if we struggle abnormally, we may almost seem normal;
If we submerge our self-pity in disciplined industry;
If we stand up and be hated, and swear not to sleep with editors;
If we regard ourselves formally, respecting our true limitations
Without making an unseemly show of trying to unfreeze our assets;
Keeping our heads and our pride while remaining unmarried;
And if wedded, kill guilt in its tracks when we stack up the dishes
And defect to the typewriter. And if mothers, believe in the luck of
our children,
Whom we forbid to devour us, whom we shall not devour,
And the luck of our husbands and lovers, who keep free women.

This conclusion, with its ironic last line, shows Kizer taking up an almost entirely new position from where the sentimentists left off. But it ignores the issue of how such overwhelming change happened in the culture at large---as well as the even more germane issue of how such necessary change can happen and will continue to happen in poetry.

How can a poet like Kizer manage to reclaim the tradition of her circumscribed, neglected literary foremothers without compromising her own strength? The poems themselves can best answer these questions. In "Bitch," for instance, the speaker takes the image of a bitch literally during a scene where she encounters an ex-lover. This inner "bitch," whom the speaker takes very firmly in hand but cannot ignore, might share some characteristics with the stereotypical lovelorn poetess:

At a kind word from him, a look like the old days,
The bitch changes her tone: she begins to whimper.
She wants to snuggle up to him, to cringe.
Down, girl! Keep your distance
Or I'll give you a taste of the choke-chain.

The bitch, who is "too demonstrative, too clumsy, / Not like the well-groomed pets of his new friends," "gag[s]" at her mistress's polite hypocrisy while being dragged "off by the scruff," and the poem ends on a note of grudging respect for her.

Another poem, "Dream of a Large Lady," deals with another sentimentist feminine shadow-figure, a large lady who receives a note from another lady remarking, in poetess-y diction, "I am an admirer of your poesy." In response, the large lady resigns herself to poetess-like behavior:

"Do come to my house near the bay,…

"We will sit here quietly, in twilight,
and drink a cup of carefully brewed tea."

But nonetheless she cannot forget the fact that her original mission was to destroy a large mounted gun; though she was only able to "decorate / but not destroy" it, "clear in her eye she holds a vision: / the thin, ceremonious shell" of the egg she left on the gun emplacement. The poesy-loving lady and the poet who has left the egg, a potent symbol of literal and symbolic female fertility, are closer than it appears, since the poet's choice of the egg as subversive weapon draws directly on the sentimentists' explicit female identification. The symbolism of "Dream of a Large Lady" offers a clue as to how Kizer has reconciled herself with the sentimentist tradition by acknowledging its power, thus strengthening her own ability to develop beyond it.

On the deepest level of archetypal themes, then, Kizer is interested in reconnecting with the basic female powers---and the sentimentist tradition offers a direct, if compromised, connection with those powers. Sentimentists like Helen Hunt Jackson or Lydia Sigourney explored themes of feminized nature and a Native American spirituality, and Kizer draws strength from the close connection of these traditions with nature. Natural power in Kizer's poetry is often exaggerated, as in the fecund gardens in the "Fanny" section of "Pro Femina" or the maimed goddesses of "Semele Recycled" and "Hera, Hung From the Sky." Even the title of Kizer's first volume, The Ungrateful Garden, suggests on one level an uneasy relation with the view of nature she had inherited from the sentimentists. But Kizer's stories of grief and defeat, outspoken as they are, descend from the sentimentists' depressed laments. Like their predecessor poems from Christina Rossetti's "Song" to Louise Bogan's "Medusa," they are elegies for the loss of female power. The depressed and victimized voices that Kizer mocks in "Pro Femina" were self-directed distortions of anger. Kizer's martyred Hera and dismembered but ultimately triumphant Semele make the sentimentists' historic anger and oppression more conscious and outer-directed, building on and transforming tradition.

Kizer's ambivalent relation to the most traditional, domestic themes of the sentimentists leads to some of her most amusing and ironic work, and a number of her more serious poems treat relationships between female friends and between mothers and daughters, traditional subjects of the sentimentists. She offers cutting, delicious satire of domestic themes in poems such as "Children" ("The orange crayon that didn't dare write, 'I hate you.'") or "Mud Soup" ("Chop the onions, chop the carrots, / Chop the tender index finger."). Even Kizer's grouping of poems during the eighties into two collections aimed at women and men (The Nearness of You: Poems for Men and Mermaids in the Basement: Poems for Women) evokes the way poems by many sentimentists, Dickinson included, arose out of and for a community of actual people and their emotional relationships.

Not only Kizer's themes, but her poetic strategies themselves are influenced by the sentimentists and throw their tradition into clearer relief. The distinctive voice of "Bitch"and "Threatening Letter," for instance, owes much to the bitter archness of Millay. The persona poem "Afterthoughts of Donna Elvira" uses the form and tone of the sentimentist tradition to arrive at a philosophy characteristic of many early twentieth-century sentimentists: "Whenever we love, we win, / Or else we have never been born." More surprisingly, the remarkable poem "In the First Stanza," based on a twelfth century Chinese women's poem, transforms the poet's self into a natural landscape in the exact manner of a sentimentist such as Sara Teasdale, who in turn was building on the self-transforming technique of earlier sentimentists such as Lydia Sigourney:

first, I tell you who I am:
shadowed, reflective, small
pool in an unknown glade.
---Kizer

I am the pool of blue
That worships the vivid sky…
---Teasdale

You know me as turbulent ocean
clouded with thunder and drama.
---Kizer 

I am a wave that cannot reach the shore,
---Teasdale

In the third stanza, I die.

I beg you to travel my body
till you find the forest glade.
---Kizer

When I go back to earth. . .
If men should pass above . . .
My dust will find a voice
To answer them aloud . . .
---Teasdale

Kizer's poem builds on and develops the key sentimentist technique of self-transformation with an ironic tone and a capaciously surrealistic structure. She answers her foremothers in homage and defiance, heightening and intensifying the grotesqueness and pathos of the sentimentists' traditional ways of self-transformation.

"A Muse of Water," the poem Kizer chose to conclude Mermaids in the Basement, is a manifesto, a defense of the woman poet whose brimming creativities have been drained by centuries of service as muse, not to mention mother:

So flows in dark caves, dries away,
What would have brimmed from bank to bank,
Kissing the fields you turned to stone,
Under the boughs your axes broke.
And you blame streams for thinning out,
Plundered by man's insatiate want?

In the ironic tradition of female apologia such as Anne Bradstreet's "Prologue," "A Muse of Water" concludes with an ironically humble threat: 

Here the warm shallows lave your feet
Like tawny hair of magdalens.
Here, if you care, and lie full-length,
Is water deep enough to drown.

Women have been robbed of their deepest inspirational power, but nonetheless, they hold depths capable of drowning a man who comes to them for inspiration, either as poet seeking a muse, or as reader seeking poetry---and it doesn't take much depth to drown a man. In this conclusion, Kizer turns a Bradstreet-like act of self-deprecation into a chilling and bitter taunt that is also a triumphant assertion of the survival of women's poetry.

At a time when works by women are reprinted most often out of a sense of historical curiosity, Kizer compiled her eclectic little book called 100 Great Poems by Women only in the name of poetic excellence, editing a true poet's anthology. Among Kizer's hundred are poems reflecting her own taste for satire and political verse, such as Anne Finch's "Trail All Your Pikes" and Sarah Cleghorn's famous and bitter quatrain "The golf links lie so near the mill / That almost every day / The laboring children can look out / And see the men at play"; poems that, like some of Kizer's finest, celebrate friendships between women; and a number of excellent poems that protest women's social and political position over the centuries.

Ever the anti-Teasdale, Kizer made a conscious decision to showcase poems on "gender-neutral" topics: "this anthology is bent on showing what women can write about besides romance and domesticity." But she does not hesitate to include a type of verse that is generally much more devalued these days: public poetry. Kizer's anthology juxtaposes familiar chestnuts, including Emma Lazarus's "The New Colossus," Felicia Homans's "Stately Homes of England," and Julia Ward Howe's "Battle Hymn of the Republic," with surprising gems from much obscurer writers, many of them anonymous or pseudonymous.

After decades of reading and loving women's poetry, I can honestly say that reading through Kizer's anthology gave me the most palpable sense I have had of how many, many, many women have written poems before me, and with what seriousness, variety, and skill. This is not surprising in view of Kizer's relation with the sentimentist tradition. I am grateful that of all contemporary women poets, she was the one to edit this book, just as I am grateful to her for keeping alive for me a link with women's poetic past. As a younger woman poet who has grown to be nourished by the women's poetic tradition daily, I can't imagine what my own work would be like if Kizer had not had the courage to embrace that tradition in all its sorrow, irony, and desire to please, its beauty, responsibility, and strength.

Annie Finch is co-editor of Carolyn Kizer: Perspectives on her Life & Work, editor of A Formal Feeling Comes: Poems in Form by Contemporary Women, After New Formalism, co-editor, with Kathrine Varnes, of An Exaltation of Forms: Contemporary Poets Celebrate the Diversity of Their Art, and author of The Ghost of Meter: Culture and Prosody in American Free Verse. Eve is her collection of poems. She teaches English and Creative Writing at Miami University of Ohio.

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